...nice work...,i like it so much...seeya.

actually, i wouldn't change much line wise for that is what caught my attention. It looks like a strong storyboard so far. As far as additions: Water seems to be a strong aspect to this, so maybe adding that as a color, dull, pale blue, especially the puddle. Your poses are strong, i like this thus far.

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There's a link in my sig that goes to a journal of mine were I posted a bunch of tutorials for just about everything you can dream of. I can point out a few of my favorites if you'd like.

Personally, I kinda like the messy look to this. It adds a lot of character. Combined with the expression it really make sit pop. Post more! :]

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its beutiful ~!!

hmmm... I like the way the lines are defined in the panel with the girl jumping. Maybe if you attempted to have all the frames like that. I like the sketchyness of it and the extra lines add a lot more movement. Since water is a big part, maybe add a little bit of a highlight wher the nearest light source is coming from. Is it supposed to look like that, as she plays she gains more color? I kind of like that idea ^^

For me, I sketch the basic stick pose, add some basic lumps of where details so be and then go in and attempt a full out ink of it. I usually redo the ink several times but I get there eventually (I mean this all using a computer) After that I just put down the base colors, fiddle with them a bit and then go in with the burn and dodge tools in photoshop till it works ^^ Then again that's me

You should do it how you feel comfortable, though I kind of like the idea of more play= more color ^^

Couldn't find a tutorial that I was comfortable recomending. I don't know what I would recomend for your pice. For me lineart is a big part of animation, and I personally can't do much without it. A lot of my recent work looks like this [link] I start with a sketch, then do some thik lines on ilustrator to give it a print sort of look, and do really simple coloring with an added texture. I also go for the "cutt out" kind of look. Photoshop vectors following my sketch. [link] Sometimes I'll go over my sketch with my wacom to make a stronger cleaner line [link] [link] Or if I did a really clean sketch I will just folow that [link] [link] I'm not real big on painting digitaly, I don't feel comfortable with my skills, and I have always been a fan of very flat images; still when ever I do something that looks a bit more like a painting or whatever i do try to leave out the lines [link]

My procest looks a lot like what you are doing right now. I do try to include a lot of information into the sketch, or make it as clean as possible. And when I have trouble coloring something I'll go back to the sketch and try to do a colored version to see if I can figure out what the hell I'm doing wrong. Like this one...[link] [link]

So that is a very simplified explanation of what I do. As for what you should do, I dont know. In the end its going to come down to what you think looks nice and you find possible to do. I always think that when you dont do lines you limit the background posibilities because you have to be always thinking about your character not getting lost in the background. With lines it is a bit easier to control that. Also, I was going through your gallery again, and I like the way you do lines.

I hope some of this information is helpful. Good luck with the rest of the proyect.

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you are absolutly amazing! thankyou for all your advice, and you have some amazingly cute and inspiring art!

Thanks!!!

Thank you soo much, I was just trying to help

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thanks! yeah, as she's playing more colour's coming into the scene -- there's actually three pages altogether. As for your advice, I like how you've explained it, I'm not one to use burn and dodge, but to put a base colour down then go figure out your highlights and shadows.

I wish I knew what felt comfortable, I think that's what I'm looking for now ^__^

but thanks for your insightful comment!